Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Bryce. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Monday, April 6, 2020
My Brother Liamππ
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Quinn,
ReplyDeleteWow, look at that chocolate cake. I can't believe that was your brothers first attempt at baking. Congratulate him for me. Did it taste as good as it looks?
Thank you for introducing your little brother, I look forward to meeting him in person when we are back at school.
Mrs Ferguson
Liam said thank you and yes it did taste goodππ€πππππ
ReplyDeleteHey Quinny! I love how many adjectives you've used in here to describe Liam, and Chase the puppy! We certainly have been having a lot of fun going on walks/scooters and going crazy in the car park, haven't we?!
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