The Unluckey Mice🐀🐀🐁

There was once a mouse. Malvery the mouse. A very unlucky mouse. A mouse that always wanted to go on an adventure but never could. A mouse that was only young but treated very badly. A mouse that had no parents at all and lived in an orphanage. The only mouse left along with 2 others that were all not wanted all not treated nicely. But they were all friends and they always had each other. Their names were Mickey and Movel. Mickey and Movel were twins and always had the same ideas. That is how they got out of trouble. Well when they were all together that is. They always had excuses like oh we thought we left our teddy down stairs but it was under my bed or I forgot to brush my teeth before bed. And they always got away with it except one time when they were being spied on by one of the twins that was having a really good day and didn't want to ruin it. So they tried not to. But it was harder because it was older twin Mickey that always sticks up to Movel. He got a little no sorry a lot told of when the teacher realized what the three of them had been doing for the last two years. They were all only 6 years old. Well the twins were 6 and a half but they were all thinking the same most of the time. Then one night Mickey had a dream that made him think differently for a day but that didn’t change everything they had done in the past or the way he thought about everything or the same as his twin Movel. He found it hard to know what to do when he got this feeling of his brother planning something big. Or when he heard them discussing what they would do. He also laughed when they asked if he wanted to join in pretending to be thinking of something funny but really drawing up a plan to get them told off. Then when he knew what to say he said yes oh and sorry I just thought of something funny. So they said, tonight let's sneak down the hall and into the kitchen, grab the chocolate cake and go back to the room. Then, so she dosnn’t suspect it was us that took the chocolate cake we will throw this stone that I am holding outside our door. Them when she comes in we will all be fake sleeping so she will go back to bed we will eat the chocolate cake then sneak the container back in the refrigerater. Sounds good eh well you wait for the real thing. So that was Malvery’s big plan that Movel liked and Mickey pretended to like but he was lying. It became night and Malvery and Movel were waiting for Mickey who was secretly telling the teacher Miss Manley the plan then Miss M was standing at the cupboard waiting for the plan to go into action and stop them by sneaking up on them. Mickey came upstairs and said ready, just making sure that the cake is easy to reach. So there they were ready to steal the cake. But oh they didn’t know what they were in for. Creep creep creep. Through the hall into the lounge past the kitchen table and right to the fridge where right behind them was Miss M. Creep Creep Creep towards the fridge and with a big yell Miss M shouted WHAT ON EARTH DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING? Umm... well we. Okay that is it all of you will go back to bed and I did hear you throw the rock that you were going to throw and you did it so secretly that nobody else knows about it. Let’s see should it be our little secret or should I tell the whole world on the news? Well I think it is only right for you to face the consequence of the whole world knowing. Then Miss M clicked 2 times and BANG! A whole camera crew stomp through the door and Miss M is thrown a microphone and is asked: Well what is going on here? Well these three have been caught by me trying to steal a chocolate cake and well this one was the one that told me the whole plan and…
MICKEY!    Miss M is interrupted with a big shout from the 2 that are the most angry out of the whole 12 people in the room. Well I think it is clear that you have all been doing this for the last 2 years sneaking around all year getting your way. It’s no wonder you haven't been so sad since the morning you woke up sick. Well at least the whole world knows that you are such selfish little mice. And from that day on they never got out of bed at night again although they were bullied by mice that were just new to the orphanage.


Remember this is in mice land but the same punishment may happen to you one day so please be good I don’t want that happening to you. Thanks From Quinn

This week for reading and writing our goal was: learning about a quality blog post and comment.
This is the powtoon that I made about it.

Hope you learnt something from it!

Here Is My Weekly Maths😜

A Unit Fration is a fration but the numerator is a one and the denominator is a whole number other than one. My goal for the week was odering unit frations and I think I really understand it now and I hope that the 2 posters that I made for you has really helped you understand them too!
Those are the 2 posters that I made to share my learning about ordering unit fratiions
Do you know the differnce betweent a unit fration and a fration?💘💖💜💎

Do You Know How To write A Quality Blog Post And Comment?☺

Hi my name is Quinn. I am back and ready to share another part of my learning. What have I been doing for my learning? For my learning I have been watching videos on how to write a quality blog post and comment. First of all it is good to introduce yourself for the people that are new to your blog. Also try to have an about me post so they can find a little bit more about you. After introducing yourself you should put a sentence that says a little bit about what the text will be based on. Now you can write your story. Once you have done this write how you felt for example if I was writing about a walk I went on write how you felt when you finished were you tired. That gives the reader a little idea of how it would have felt when you finished the walk. Now you have shared how you felt you are ready for the last step. Make sure you add a question at the end of the blog post like when have you been on a family walk like this.

Now you know how to write a quality blog post you are ready to learn about comments. The pretend post we are commenting on is a family walk. We need to read the text before we comment so go on and read the text. Now you can start the comment. First say who you are incase the writer doesn’t know and maybe say something like Kia Ora to start. This is what it will look like.
Kia Ora Emily my name is Quinn.
Now you write something positive like this.
Kia Ora Emily my name is Quinn.
I really liked the post that you did on your family walk. I love the way you added a picture of you all, that made me want to read it. I always love things to do with family.

Now you can write something thoughtful like this.
Kia Ora Emily my name is Quinn.
I really liked the post that you did on your family walk. I love the way you added a picture of you all, that made me want to read it. I always love things to do with family. It reminded me of my family walk that I went on to the golf course and back. It wasn’t as interesting as yours but it was still a family walk.

Now you can add something helpful like this.
Kia Ora Emily my name is Quinn.
I really liked the post that you did on your family walk. I love the way you added a picture of you all, that made me want to read it. I always love things to do with family. It reminded me of my family walk that I went on to the golf course and back. It wasn’t as interesting as yours but it was still a family walk. Next time you could maybe proofread it a little bit more and make sure it makes a little more sense but apart from that it was a really good post.

Now you are up to the final step. Ask a question and say something like bye or Heikona like this.
Kia Ora Emily my name is Quinn.
I really liked the post that you did on your family walk. I love the way you added a picture of you all, that made me want to read it. I always love things to do with family. It reminded me of my family walk that I went on to the golf course and back. It wasn’t as interesting as yours but it was still a family walk. Next time you could maybe proofread it a little bit more and make sure it makes a little more sense but apart from that it was a really good post. That was a really good blog post. I loved the whole thing!
Did the walk that you went to remind you of anything?
Heikona! From Quinn.

Now you know how to write a quality blog comment and post you can go out and try it! It’s easy just read through this post and have fun blogging.

Have you ever written a comment on somebody's blog?

Heikona!(Bye)👋🦄

Here is my screencastify

My Maths Poster

This is a poster that I made for my maths for school.

My Awesome Timeline!😇😊

My amzing timeline is a timeline that I calll amazing so here is the link so you can veiw it.

MY AMAZING MOTHERS DAY!💝💞💟💄👜👗👑

My amazing mothers day was on may 10 on sunday. We got up and played with our toys and wraped Mum's presents. I chose my present first and I chose fluffy socks like pink and light blue and stuff one them. Then there were all types of treats and stuff. When she opend the present I went and got the card that I made her for mothers day from me only instead of all of us kids. Then we had breakfast witch was giant croissants. Then we went to Nana's house and had a play and them Grandma's house and had a play. Then we went to Poppa's house and had a really small play, Then we went home. This was the best Mothers day ever!

The Coke And Mentos Experiment😜

On may 11 we did the coke and mentos experiment but it didn't make a very big explotion.What makes the coke react to the mentos the way it does is a prosses called nucleation. That is where the carbon dioxside in the soda is attracted to the mentos. It causes a big explotion.

HERE IS THE VIDEO!!!

My Great Long Walk😳

On the 8th of May me, Mum, Elsha, George and Liam went on a walk while Dad was at home working. First we just walked down our street and saw a german shepherd. It barked at us really loud and then ran away. It was a fun first part of the walk.

The second part of the walk was almost just as fun because me and Elsha were the group leaders for the walk. We got to make sure that the group stayed toghether and all went the right way. We walked to the golf course and Mum took some photos.

Next we walked to the library. It was only a small walk from the golf course to the library but when we got there we took another photo.Then we walked home.

On the way home we passed the school that had covid 19 testing but we didn’t go through it. We walked past the supermarket and then we tunred to walk down the footpath.

Next we turned down ouir street and walked home. It was a great big walk. Then I came home and wrote this story. Hope you enjoyed my story and I will write another one since I love writing stories. BBBBBYYYYYEEEEE!!!!!

My Story

This is the story of me and one of my funniest times of my life. Once I was on a round about and it was spinning really fast. Then when it got so fast it was out of control I flew off it. Then when I tried to stand up I was so dizzy and coudn't. Then I fell back down and started laughing. And yes I fell onto my back but luciley I didn't hurt myself. So that concludes it so BBBYYYEEE!!!🤣

Here is a google drawing that I did of my teacher from year 3 & 4.

My Reading Blog📙About The Turkey

My reading blog is just me shareing my reading activity. So for reading we had to create a poster or somthing to share our learning but I chose a poster. This is the poster that I madewhile tracing a turkey.Does it look like it came off the internet because if it does well i just traced it not really of the internet🦃

1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10!

This is my create part of learn create share!🦄

All About Me!😳

Hi my name is Quinn. I am 9 years old turing 10 this year. My birthday is December 8. I really love unicorns🦄and I have 6 people in my family. Dad, Mum, Elsha, Me, George and Laim. Dad is 42 Mum is 37 Elsha is 10 I am 9 George is 8 and Liam is 5 now. Our family had 2 dogs but one of them died a long time ago but we still thing of her a lot. some nights when I think of her in bed I pray for her and the other people in my family that have died when I think of them. The domestic animals that I like are Dogs Cats and Bunnies. My Nanna has a cat and 2 dogs. One of the dogs is really nice to the cat and one is not as nice. The cats name is Loulou. The little nice dog is cute fluffy black one called Mollie and the other white fluffy one is called Joe. They are nice dogs but I only like to hold Mollie. I have alot of relatives and they are all very kind to me. Thanks for reading All About Me!😳

SQUEAK SQUEAK!🐭🐁🐀

One May the 6 I finished my animal report on mice. The reason that I chose mice is that one day my sister Elsha was dressed up like a mouse and so I decided to do a report on them. here is the link for my report on mice. This was great because I got to learn about mice aswell as shareing the information.

Drawing A Toucan👍

Today we drew a toucan that was from this sheetꜛAnd we did it i 6 easy steps👍