Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Bryce. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 14, 2020
My Awesome Timeline!ππ
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Hi Quinn,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a fabulous slide show about Mary. You have covered many of the significant moments over her lifetime and it was nice to read and be reminded of them. Mary is a great role model to us even today, and it's great that we can celebrate this with her feast day. Well done.
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