Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Bryce. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, May 8, 2020
My Great Long Walk๐ณ
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Hi Quinn
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your story about your family walk! I bet dad enjoyed a bit of quite time for his work! I love all the detail in your story, I could picture your walk and where you went! Keep up the great writing.
Kia Ora Kirsten,
DeleteThanks for that nice comlement. It really was a great walk, and yes Dad loved his quite time at home. I think anyway.
From Quinn๐